Saturday, April 13, 2013

Reviews needed

Book reviews are the backbone of book promotion. No reviews = poor book sales. Kingdom of Rage has been on sale since November but has only garnered two reviews. If you've read the book, all I need is five minutes of your time telling others how much you loved (or hated) the story. That's all it takes. Word of mouth is critical in publishing.

Here's where to go:  Kingdom of Rage 

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

March Madness

I want to preface this by announcing that Kingdom of Rage is back on sale on Barnes & Noble and Smashwords!

Much of the last month I've been hemming and hawing over the The Oceanus Project's outline. Like any creative project, what you start out with is vastly different than the final product. If you're new to book outlining, there are two ways you can write a novel: first, you can create a cast of characters and a theme and launch head first into a story, without knowing how the book is going to end until you actually write it. The second is a little more complicated: create an outline of the entire book, with a rough sketch of how you want each chapter to travel. The later is much more sensical in my case because action thrillers utilize red herrings and multiple subplots, making them much easier to plan. 

There are multiple stages of outlining. Sounds monotonous but it's actually the most important part because it allows you to put multiple ideas down onto paper—in this case the screen. I may have ten different paths the story could go, and I need to narrow it down to one. A week from now I may decide that the first path doesn't work. This happened a day ago when I realized that I had a serious plot hole in the opening scene. If I missed it, I would have written gobs of pages only to have to edit or delete out entire sections. What a waste of time that would be. 

The first stage is deciding what the general theme is and how can I incorporate the last book into this one. That's difficult because the last book is set in stone whereas I have flexibility with the current one. 

Once you choose the theme, then you get into the nitty-gritty: the characters, subplots, and plausibility and entertainment value of events. If the scene isn't exciting, I edit it until it is or I scrap it. 

The third part is the worst: second-guessing your work and running the outline through the emotional meat-grinder. Does the story work? Will people read it? Is it dreck? Self-doubt is a normal and sobering part of the process. But it keeps it real. 

Where I am at now is in the plausibility stage. I found an enormous plot hole in the first section and need to work through it or come up with an alternate scene. Solving this could take five seconds or five weeks. 

Some novelists can push out books faster than a Taylor Swift relationship, but I'm not one of them. Below is how I feel.


Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Help me reach 100!

The one hundred mark is so close but it eludes me. Kingdom of Rage sales stagnated at seventy-four, so I need your help. I want to reach the big 100 by the end of February. To light the fire, I've discounted the book 30%. Reaching this goal would be a pivotal milestone and would inspire my latest project, The Oceanus Project, the third installment in the Rich Fordham Series.

Friday, January 25, 2013

The next epic thriller: The Oceanus Project

I asked friends on Facebook a few weeks ago to give me their opinion on what kind of story I should write next. They had two options to choose from, the first being a sequel to Kingdom of Rage, and would pick up where the story left off. The second, tentatively named The Oceanus Project, has a mysterious theme, one where professional divers find an object hidden within the remains of an ancient Roman shipwreck. I was naturally drawn to the idea of the unknown, the only problem is my brain seems to have stroked out because I can’t figure out what the object should do or if it has any mystical powers. 

This brings me to the book Deception Point, by Dan Brown. In it, scientists discover a large sphere hidden deep in the Arctic ice. Once free, they find traces of extraterrestrial life, proof that we are not alone in the universe. The story was fascinating and gave me the inspiration to try to give life to my mysterious object. But wait, there’s more: the object actually exists. The object was found in the early 20th century and archaeologists were able to ascertain what the object was designed for. It’s the world’s first analog computer, a device eons ahead of anything else. You are either saying 'gee whiz' or 'that's pretty cool'. 

So, that’s where I’m at. What, if anything, does this thing do? Does it have supernatural powers? Is it like the movie Abyss where the thing comes alive? Sci-fi isn’t really my style. Does it have healing powers? Is it sinister? Good? Save the world or destroy it? There’s my problem: almost everything has been done. What would Michael Crichton, Dan Brown, or Tom Clancy do? Thinking...thinking...

Or I could go Indiana Jones on it and make Biblical references—but I don’t know anything about the Bible. Sigh. 

After jotting down over five pages of notes, admittedly I’m stuck. Well, sort of. I want to stick with the media theme, although I don’t think Rich Fordham is going to make the cut. I love his character but making the transition from book to book is extremely difficult to make plausible. 

I like the idea of having a protagonist that has a former military or law enforcement background who delves into the world of underwater photography, journalism, and documentary filmmaking. Something in his/her day job causes them to burn out and retire. 

Let’s take a step back for a moment. When I was plotting a story for Kingdom, it took a good 6-12 months before my epiphany finally struck. The only problem I’ve discovered is that people aren’t inclined to read a story that take place in the Middle East by an unknown author. That’s why I’m trying to figure out a way to keep elements of Oceanus local. When people read they love it when they see a restaurant, city, street, or hotel that they recognize. “Oh! I’ve been there!” they say. 

Oceanus needs to have adventure...romance...mystique...you get the picture. I want characters that are just as interesting and provocative as the object that draws you in immediately. 

By now, you’ve come up with your images of what would make for an epic escapist novel. What do you think I should write about? What should the object do? Any characters that scream out at you?

Saturday, January 5, 2013

How should the drama continue?

After jotting down over five pages of notes, the outline for the Kingdom of Rage sequel is no where near complete. There are so many options of where to take the story; *spoiler alert* the first book ended with Saeed’s death and Rich and Gabe were taken into custody and charged with treason by the FBI. The ending was purposefully left open-ended for continuity.

With tensions in Benghazi, Syria, and the Muslim world taking much of the media spotlight, it seems natural to continue the story with a theme of religious fundamentalism. With the uproar over a silly YouTube video, I can see putting my own spin on the video that Rich was forced to make in the first torture scene. Does that mean that the setting should remain in the Middle East? Nothing is off limits.

Rich’s quest to become a world-renowned journalist ended with him being escorted out of a restaurant in shackles. What is really going on? There is an underlying conspiracy that Rich is still unaware of. The question is, how does he find out? By accident? An attack? What would Tom Clancy do? He’d probably devise some uber-methodical contraption that takes fifty pages to describe. I like his work, but he’s a bit long winded.

What fans continue to tell me is they love the technical details, weapons systems, all the gadgets that make 007 flicks so much fun. One movie that struck my attention is Batman, The Dark Knight Rises. Directed by Chris Nolan, it has all the elements needed of a successful action thriller. Granted, I'm not into fantasy-like characters; mine are all people taken straight out of the headlines. This may not be as dramatic, but I prefer a sense of realism because it hits you on a more personal level.

I need your ideas. Where do you want the story to go? What characters should I add? Should I make the theme darker or has it hit its sweet spot? Let me know, and if I like your ideas, I may even include you in the book. How’d you like to see your name in print?

For those of you that have finished Kingdom, let me know how much you liked it. I love feedback and look forward to satisfying your inner thriller seeker.

Monday, December 31, 2012

Linzember results are in...

Linzember started off slow, and at times I was concerned that donations and sales would fail to reach our goal of reaching $1,000. Some very gracious people came forward and helped out when Lindsay needed the financial help the most. After tallying the sales and getting final numbers, I'm proud to say that we actually exceeded our goal. That’s right, we hit the $1,300 mark!

To those that donated: thank you, you know who you are and we’re extremely gracious for your act of generosity. Thanks and happy new year!  Here’s to a happy 2013!

Saturday, December 29, 2012

FREE—Saturday and Sunday only

It's that time of year again. Kingdom of Rage went free so no more excuses. Happy reading. =)

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Wednesday, December 26, 2012

How to escape during the holidays

Enjoy your new eReader by taking advantage of my 48-hour sale. My gift to you for Christmas is to offer Kingdom of Rage for 75% off of retail price. Grab your spiked eggnog, kick off your shoes, and escape with my new action thriller.

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Barnes and Noble

Smashwords

Signing my first books to friends and family for Christmas

Monday, December 17, 2012

Announcing the 72-hour sale! Linzember is in full gear.

From now until Wednesday, December 19th, save 50% on your copy of Kingdom of Rage. Just my way of bringing in some Christmas cheer. And remember, all proceeds go to helping Lindsay Maynard. Happy holidays!

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Kingdom of Rage, Smashwords

Kingdom of Rage, Barnes & Noble

Linzember update:  It's already passed the middle of the month, we should have had over 150 sales to reach our goal. Unfortunately, there have only been 9 sales. This is surprising, I thought more people would have been inclined to buy or donate. It's not too late, though. Even if we can get 50 sales, this is a victory, albeit a small one. Thanks.

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Linzember fundraiser update 12/4

As of today I've had 3 sales of Kingdom of Rage, the profits of course going to charity. We need to be selling 10 copies per day to reach our goal of $1,000.  Please show your support and purchase a book or donate.

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